tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212252756808359091.post1924796070146439859..comments2015-04-13T20:24:51.242-07:00Comments on Anna Baker: From Apartment 21Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04136788336226789241noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212252756808359091.post-15631495820270180252015-01-26T06:08:05.091-08:002015-01-26T06:08:05.091-08:00If I can't find the answer to all my problems ...If I can't find the answer to all my problems at the bottom of this bottle, it's gotta be at the bottom of the next one. Ann Reynoldshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15414189436885749050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212252756808359091.post-70156403305601627012015-01-26T06:06:09.225-08:002015-01-26T06:06:09.225-08:00The snow is piling up outside and the bills are pi...The snow is piling up outside and the bills are piling up on my coffee table.Ángel Ortegahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00758302412615191202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4212252756808359091.post-40341583986553240132015-01-26T06:00:58.024-08:002015-01-26T06:00:58.024-08:00Good job incorporating the history -- the transiti...Good job incorporating the history -- the transition feels natural. You seem to have done a good job of incorporating it throughout your blog. I think you could also benefit from taking a bit more of a positive spin or giving your character something specific to work toward to focus the blog. It feels very negative right now, and even the positive elements start with negative experiences (when you meet Cole). I would like to know more about what you plan to do with your life -- goals, aspirations, etc.Ángel Ortegahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00758302412615191202noreply@blogger.com